NO! I’m not...It’s not what I mean! Shouts Ody, her friends look so mad at her and that’s a big mistake. “Then, why? Are you trying to make us be hated?” ask one of her friend. “ Not like that, I’m just asking!” Seriously, the thing is more complicated here. Suddenly Igar and Zayn come in the right time. “Hey-hey, what happend here?” ask Igar, then looks at Ody. “She thought that all of us stole her wallet,” answer Ody friend. Igar and Zayn look at Ody, they look like they want an explanation. “ Is that true?” asked Zayn, Ody shook her head. “NO, I just ask them if they know my wallet,” explain Ody. Now, she look like want to cry. Igar and Zayn are symphatic to her. “ I just ask a..hiks hiks...simple *sneeze* question, ‘by the way, do you know my wallet?’ She tries to explain. Igar and Zayn look again to her friends. “Hey guys, look Ody was just asked to all of you about her wallet, this just a simple problem, okay? Don’t have to make it big,” Igar explain. Their friends look shy. “Shall we help her?” asked Zayn following by ‘yes’ from all the people.
Ody was at the toilet, she at the Friday-Saturday camping house with all of her friends from SMP Harapan Bangsa. She was happy, very happy, but when it was time to dinner Ody took her noodle bowl to the tent, she realized that something was missing. "Oh, no!" she put her bowl down and searched something as her predicted. " Where is my wallet?!" she shouts panickly. " I can't go home! No, I must ask someone." Then, she ran outside and started ask someone she met. She didn't realize that she made all of them misunderstood her!
"Have you found it?!" Igar shouts so loudly that heard by everyone, they shook their heads. Ody sighed. " Gar, I will ask teacher's help okay?" she said to Igar. Igar nods. But, when Ody turned her body, something fell from her jacket pocket. " What is that?" Zayn ask, every eyes on her. "THAT'S MY WALLET!!" she shouted histerically. "WHAT??!" Igar, Zayn, and her friends shout at her. Ody just gave them an apologetically smile. "Peace!"
"ODY!!!!"
Note:
This writing piece is written by an ET 12 student named Salsabilla F.S. The theme is : writing a dramatic short story using the DeBowen technique, which steps are : conflict, climax, Lead-in, resolution. Her short story completes all the requirements, and it has the most interesting story, among all her classmates'.
